By the way, you can use AI as a expert in English, inputting the Chinese article and this translation paragraph by paragraph (or part by part), and asking it to comment your translation and give some suggestions to do some modifications.

Thank you very much! And thank you for correcting my translation again

回复 @圆环之理：I think that you can comapre the AI translation version with your written version. By finding the difference, you can find something.

(I just did like that.)

回复 @啊啊是谁都对：Thank you for your advise