能不能帮我完善一下下面这封英语信件，改正一些语法/用词错误什么的，谢谢

Dear releaser of <Nothing Together>,

I take this "game" (software) for the PC version of the SmartPhone Application "Forest" from the releaser Seekrtech (This Application can force you to concentrate on your learning or working, just like PomoTodo). I think this app and your "game" is very useful for me

I have bought Light Theme and Cute Theme. I hope you could release Eye Protection Theme. 

If you can fulfill my wish, I will be very grateful. Thank you very much!

With friendly regards

A normal player

Here's a polished version of your letter with corrected grammar, improved phrasing, and more natural English:

Dear Developer of <Nothing Together>,  

I recently discovered your "game" (software), which serves as the PC version of the Seekrtech smartphone application "Forest." (This application helps users concentrate on their work or studies, similar to PomoTodo.) I find both the original app and your PC version extremely useful.  

I've already purchased the Light Theme and Cute Theme, and I was wondering if you might consider releasing an Eye Protection Theme in the future.  

If you could fulfill this request, I would be truly grateful. Thank you for your time and consideration!  

Best regards,  

A loyal user  

Key improvements:

1. More natural opening ("Dear Developer" sounds more professional than "releaser")

2. Clearer explanation of the app's purpose

3. Corrected verb tenses ("I find" instead of "I think...is")

4. More polite and natural phrasing for the request

5. Added "loyal user" which sounds warmer than "normal player"

6. Fixed minor grammatical issues throughout

The tone is now more professional while remaining friendly. Let me know if you'd like any further adjustments!

以下这篇内容有没有语法/用词错误

Dear Steam Customer Service,

I have bought a CD-Key on a platform. When I want to activate it, it is said this Key was already activated by another Steam-Account. And the platform will only provide refund when I provide the screenshot about when this Key was activated

I hope you could provide what I need and when possible to which account this CD-Key was bound

Thank you very much

With friendly regards

A Steam-User

你的内容已经表达得很清楚了，但可以稍作修改以更自然和正式。以下是修正后的版本：

________________________________________

Subject: Request for Information Regarding CD-Key Activation

Dear Steam Customer Service,

I purchased a CD-Key from a third-party platform. When I attempted to activate it, I received a message stating that the key had already been activated by another Steam account. The platform has informed me that they will only issue a refund if I provide a screenshot showing when the key was activated.

Could you please provide me with the activation details of this CD-Key, including the date it was activated and, if possible, the account to which it was bound?

Thank you very much for your assistance.

Best regards,

[A Steam User]

________________________________________

修改说明：

1. 标题：添加了明确的邮件主题，便于客服快速了解你的需求。

2. 更清晰的表达： 

o "bought a CD-Key on a platform" → "purchased a CD-Key from a third-party platform"（更正式且明确）。

o "it is said" → "I received a message stating"（更自然）。

3. 更礼貌的请求： 

o 使用 "Could you please" 代替 "I hope you could"，更符合正式请求的语气。

4. 细节补充： 

o 明确说明需要的信息（activation details, date, account）。

5. 结尾： 

o "With friendly regards" → "Best regards"（更通用且正式）。

这样修改后，邮件会更专业、清晰，也更容易得到客服的积极回应。