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【Weekly Topic 2024.10.19】Story-writing: Raindrops and Tears
啊啊是谁都对
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1樓 發表於:2024-10-19 23:22

Read this sentence and try creating a story according to that:  I always like walking in the rain, so no one can see me crying.


Some hints about the elements of a story:


1.Character Development: Who is this person? What is their background, and what events have led them to this point where they seek refuge in the rain?


2.Setting the Scene: Describe the environment in which your story takes place. How does the rain influence the mood and setting of your narrative?


3.Emotional Journey: What emotions are at play? How does the act of walking in the rain both conceal and reveal the character's true feelings?


4.Conflict and Resolution: Is there a turning point or a moment of realization for your character? How does the rain play a role in this?


5.Symbolism: How does the rain symbolize broader themes or the character's inner state?

圆环之理
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2樓 發表於:2024-10-20 15:20
Let me think about it
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3樓 發表於:2024-10-20 15:45
In 2022 I had a very good friend named Fu Sheng. I always played "Anonymous and Guess" game in the qq-group with her. But at last she betrayed us. She scolded somebody anonymously in our group and at last we found the violator was she. I was disappointed and we were no more friends. 


At that time I was always feeling depressed and thought perhaps I had done something wrong, like I had not proclaimed that I cannot tolerate [violating the group rules anonymously] at all in advance, it is one of my two most intolerable things (of course I also don't like others violating the group rules onymously, but when committing it anonymously, I'll be angrier). And I sometimes walked on the road, when it rained, I cried, because the raindrops could conceal my tears.


A few months later, I was in the rain. I listened to the music with my smartphone. The song in my earphones is [The Funeral of the Roses] from Xu Hao. I heard the lyrics:


Always recalling the past and blaming myself

Always thinking of you unconsciously

Now you are already too unattainable for me

Can only stay in my memories


I looked up to the sky, sighed, and suddenly got over it thoroughly!

 
啊啊是谁都对:A great story!
  2024-10-26 08:28 回復
啊啊是谁都对:and maybe the singer of [The Funeral of the Roses] is Xu Song?
  2024-10-26 08:29 回復
圆环之理:回复 @啊啊是谁都对:Oh, sorry. Yeah, I mean him
  2024-10-26 15:40 回復
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4樓 發表於:2024-10-20 15:50
And now I even rejoice, fortunately [Anonymous Chat] is forbidden thoroughly from Tencent
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5樓 發表於:2024-10-26 23:07
I'm so sorry that I have no time to think a story.

Once I have enough time, I'll make up that.

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